Get The Thrills In

Including swears.

I wake up this morning.
Wake up late.
Missed ten phone calls.
Feeling hate.

I was meant to be
there at ten.
For the meeting
I can't miss out again.

I woke up this morning.
Feeling hate.
My life's more s**t,
Coz I woke up late.

My life is going from,
bad to worse.
My ex left me last week,
and now I'm more in dirt.


So I'm saying.
Let's get the pills in.
I've had enough.
Get all the thrills in.

I'm dirt broke,
and my life's is poor.
I can't be living this life,
any more.

So I'm saying.
Let's get all the pills in.
I've had enough.
Let's get all the thrills in.

If I was to overdose,
who would care?
I've been lonely for years,
so f**k all that's there.


I ain't got,
time for this.
Yeah I wanna hug.
Yeah I wanna kiss.

There are the people,
that I will miss.
But I didn't choose life,
to come to this.

If I'd of known,
it was gonna be like this.
I would killed myself,
earlier.

If I could be,
reading the future.
I would have known,
it could only get worse.



So I'm saying.
Let's get the pills in.
I've had enough.
Get all the thrills in.

I don't wanna fight.
I don't wanna ride it.
I've got a spliff.
And I just wanna light it.

So I'm saying.
Let's get all the pills in.
I've had enough.
Let's get all the thrills in.

No I won't change.
And I don't care.
So f**k reality.
And what wasn't there.

Author's Note

It's just one of those days, when you overslept then you feel pissed off because your life was crap anyway, so now you've ruined the only good thing going for you.

It's just one of those days.

Reviews

[Carolina Kel]

I got a gritty kind of vibe from this and it worked pretty well with what you were saying here. Nicely done.

[MiidniightSoul]

It's an amazing piece. I could feel the desperation in your poem, when nothing seems to be going right. When you just want to give up and stop caring. Very beautifully written. Keep it up ^^

[MuSe Ampoule]

This definitely gives voice to those desperate feelings, when nothing seems to go right in a long life of things not going right. I've known several people like this and it's unfortunate that there never seems to be a quick fix. Pills, drugs only drag it on and on in a horrible loop. This is well written and expressive.

[Michael X]

Wow, this is brilliant, a presentation that rises to the top in conjunction to the meaning the imagery is raw and real, scidrow defined in all its glory.
the emotional interjection works wonders!

[Eagle Cruagh]

Nope, that`s not me. I always feel like the
answer to every woman`s prayer.
Who am I kidding ! You nailed it. We all feel
like crap sometimes, but you are the one who
brought those feelings to life, putting breath in them.
Great job. Great writer.
----- Eagle Cruagh

[tynamite]

yeah true it could be a punk rock song if it had less lyrics in it or heavy metal

[Sssss]

I love how it's all different perspectives of different people, yet it they're feeling are mutual and all mesh together.
And this would actually be a really good song...

[The True Angel Of Sin]

I like how the poem goes from one person to another. It shows how diffrent people. Living diffrent lives can be in the same slump, and probably the same time. Life loves to kick people in the a*s, especially people are are drawn to pills, drugs, beer. Everything I love it seems..

[.]

Lol! Heck yah! Late for breakfast, late to catch the bus, late to meet role call in class. Late.. Late.. Late banging head on the clock tower of fate! I love this poem! xD
The frustrationg builds once the first domino falls. I think it's part of being human, that we get so warped around a schedule and when it shatters... BLAM! Our minds become gorilla drool.

Kisses! - Ash

[SunShine13]

i mean that was amazing