Drop by Drop

Cold of flesh

Sharp of teeth

Strength and speed

To us be told

 

Creeper of night

Drinker of blood

Bringer of death

Immortal forever more

 

Whispers of sweet words

Dreams of bliss

No sweeter death

Then death by you

 

Drop by drop

Closer to death

 

Drop by drop

My heart stops

Reviews

[Silere]

Wow.. quite the powerful ending.. Your description of this kind of death is awesome! The slowness of your own thinking as you slowly bleed to death.. drop by drop.. is something I can imagine very well after reading this poem. You are quite talented and I hope you continue to write what is within you...with all the emotions and passion you have for any one subject. Keep true to yourself and Thank you for sharing!