Torn to Pieces

Torn to Pieces

 

found on the ground sorting

through all the scattered pieces,

 

as once we held everything together

but with one unfaithful wind all blew down...

 

whom shall remain to gather all that's tattered

and will hope ever offer a trusted hand of healing

 

11-3-09

Reviews

[A]

This was a very interesting read.

Overall, I really like the style, although a little more could have been added to the poem I think, though I'm not sure what. Overall, nice job. :D

[ace]

interesting imagery but it seems a little short just seems like it needs a bit more to it