Comatose

Comatose

 

running my fingers along

my achingly worried face,

 

can I slip into a coma

and awaken when all is well...

 

10-31-09

 

 

Reviews

[Clockwork]

This is the second time in a many days that I have come across your work. What I find most awesome about it is the juxtaposition. You introduce an idea in the first stanza, then give an answer that varies in the second. It is almost like a call and response.