Hard Partying

Hard Partying

 

let's party

and get flirty,

 

then seek amnesty

for the nights dirty...

 

10-19-09

 

 

Reviews

[Charles]

Short and to the point, as they often are. The time shift bothers me a bit - I'd like to see 'tonight's' dirty or simply ''the' night's dirty. The present or future tense fits better wth the invitation to party and get flirty. Try it and see what you think.