Giving of the Heart

Giving of the Heart

 

wildly searching for

a way to give freely,

 

but knowing none

for the heart's so closed

 

10-17-09

Reviews

[Dil]

Im still quite new to this so understand, I might feel alone in this when I say I wish it was better detailed.
You started out with such powerful words I imagined a laid out story before me.

Well as I said More detail would be great, but please stick with your great choice in words/ phrases.