Funeral Pyre

Funeral Pyre

A Poem by James K. Blaylock

Funeral Pyre

 

with sword drawn

it seeks blood,

 

and the flesh

shall truly open...

 

then the pyre

will be burnt

 

10-17-09

© 2009 James K. Blaylock


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Lol! I might add more... but then again.

jkb

Posted 15 Years Ago
That's better and what I thought you meant. Think you need another stanza in this one to help possibly clarify what "it" might be.

Posted 15 Years Ago
Funeral Pile? You lost me on this one.

Posted 15 Years Ago


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James K. Blaylock
James K. Blaylock

Tyler, TX



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Hi, I'm James K. Blaylock and I'm a poet/writer. I'm 39, and I live in Texas. I was born and raised here. I have been writing now for 13 years and I've been blessed to be published a number of times. .. more..

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