Cheating Death

Cheating Death

 

living by a lifeline

handed down by higher,

 

nothing echoes truer

than death being cheated

 

10-16-09

Reviews

[Tony]

Nice. Short and clear is the best. Word compression is about saving the right ones.....
This is a good example.
A lifeline handed down by higher, insinuates life is merely a fragile gift, without drawing particular entities into the picture. In this world full of disease and corruption, cheating death has become the day to day.
Well done.

[Dillon Cotter]

true, the feeling of escaping death is a miracle yet a feeling of relief. like a weight pushed of your back. good work dude.

-Will