Vortex of Obscurity

Vortex of Obscurity

 

hanging onto this form

of our only known reality

 

as we're being drawn

into a vortex of obscurity...

 

but couldn't we simply

cleave unto the raining mercy

 

10-14-09

 

 

Reviews

[Dillon Cotter]

this is really different, but difference is the key thing that gets us writers to like it. kinda like a "new" style, James. good work.

-Will

[Legion]

Cleave? An interesting word with different meanings. I like this piece.