Back on Track

Back on Track

 

reach right down

to where I am at

 

lending me a hand

and a shove on the back,

 

because I need to be put

squarely upon the correct track

 

10-13-09

Reviews

[Tiffany]

I like this and I think it might be one that could use some 'filling out.' As it stands right now it is a plea for help, one we have all shared, yet it is a tad emotionless imho, I think that keeps it from bridging a shared human dillema from the speaker to the reader. thanks for sharing James, t.