Desiring Flight

Desiring Flight

 

with wings

standing outspread,

 

we watch

as the air is a breezy playground...

 

wishing wholly

for a taste of their soaring majesty

 

10-10-09

 

Reviews

[Tiffany]

Not to many can pull that off...6 short lines powerpacked with imagery and a secret wish in the heart of all men. Very good title also. Thanks for sharing, t.

[Dillon Cotter]

very open feel, i sense the imagery esp "as the air is a breezy playground" gives off a spine chilling cool with a great feeling. awesome work.

-Will