Prey or Pray

Prey or Pray

 

lay not like prey,

 

instead focus

on moving around,

 

because those

beastlies never stop,

 

no way... then

 

down they will take you

if you allow them to stay

 

8-19-09

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Sean M. Addams]

very intersting piece ... I like the title of this alot catch my attention and made me want to read more... overall i thought you did well on this... nice work.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Great use of a few short words and a play on like sounds in the title.