More Than a Feeling

More Than a Feeling

A Poem by James K. Blaylock

More Than a Feeling

 

fiddle not with pure abandon

and glory not in the snake's eyes,

 

riddle no more in such randoms

and follow nothing which boldly lies...

 

8-18-09

 

 

© 2009 James K. Blaylock


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A meaning that I gather from this write is that things aren't what they seem. "snake's eyes". Snakes have forked tongues, and when calling someone a "snake" it usually means that they lie, they deceive, they essentially, metaphorically, slither.
Perhaps it's about not trusting someone, or that it's useless to follow your empty hopes?

I can't quite figure this out...it's bloody frustrating. Nevertheless, this is a definite favorite, And I'll be revisiting it again some day...

A brilliant write.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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A meaning that I gather from this write is that things aren't what they seem. "snake's eyes". Snakes have forked tongues, and when calling someone a "snake" it usually means that they lie, they deceive, they essentially, metaphorically, slither.
Perhaps it's about not trusting someone, or that it's useless to follow your empty hopes?

I can't quite figure this out...it's bloody frustrating. Nevertheless, this is a definite favorite, And I'll be revisiting it again some day...

A brilliant write.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow, love this one James. Powerfully stated with few words. The mark of a true writer! Great work as always~ Jude :-)

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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James K. Blaylock
James K. Blaylock

Tyler, TX



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Hi, I'm James K. Blaylock and I'm a poet/writer. I'm 39, and I live in Texas. I was born and raised here. I have been writing now for 13 years and I've been blessed to be published a number of times. .. more..

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