Spiritless Jelly (Is it Fair?)

Spiritless Jelly (Is it Fair?)

 

tell me, is it at all fair

that this cold world

 

should grind our very

bones to bitter dust...

 

leaving us merely

limp fleshy bags

of spiritless jelly

 

5-24-09

Reviews

[Clarisse Nanoit]

No.
And I love that you said it that way.
I never woulda thought to put it that way...
But that's what writing is for, jkb.
Not only does it give us the opportunity to say ANYTHING we want ANY WAY we want to, but it provides an outlet so that we can be less like this... "spiritless jelly". Very coooool, the irony that you WROTE about it...
Ok, it's late and I'm making little to no sense.
Great write.
KH

[Eagle Cruagh]

Don`t let it happen.
And just between us, I don`t think anybody/thing
will ever get you down to that extent.

This is a neat little poem in a few words.

Rated 100 %

----- Eagle Cruagh

[deeps]

Hmm! Intersting, good way though.
Well said.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

no, it's not fair. lol, a cool write james.