Oh, The Time

Oh, The Time

 

trying to breath, but

all air-ways are blocked

 

fighting to live, but

growing wearry from shock...

 

nothing means nothing, and now,

the hands are gone from your clock

 

3-30-09

 

 

Reviews

[Alz Alz]

this definitely has meaning behind it. very nice!

[Gheeneil]

I sense the struggle for survival. "Hands are gone from your clock" could mean end of something. It could be death but I can't tell if this piece refers to that.

[Poeticpiers]

asthma attack?James