Somewhere Near

Somewhere Near

 

seeing you tomorrow

is more than I can bare,

 

because last time I saw you,

you were soon to disappear,

 

and nothing can come from fresh new tears,

but surely, I shall shed them if you're somewhere near

 

3-9-09

Reviews

[Michael X]

heartfelt and metaphorical scope with eternal aspects, this is beautifullly done, and gives the reader
a chance to reflect as captured in the essence. great job!

[N. N. Grainger]

a nice little poem, i like it when people keep it simple you've done this very well