Looking for a New Place

Looking for a New Place

 

growing leary of this place,

and of the tomorrows yet to face

 

where can we go to find some soulful embrace,

with helpful and hopeful space to firmly brace

 

3-9-09

Reviews

[Gheeneil]

Exactly same thought which everyone ponders on. The search continues. You have grasped virtual reality.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

I like Michael's invented word, "indivisual"; hmmm, a person of singular vision no doubt. I feel this same way here about the Cafe' at times. lol great write.

[Michael X]

james this poem speaks on many levels and thats whats great about it, it allows the reader to draw there own conclusion based on indivisual perception, the rhymes really brought out the focus, excellent job!