Whittling Away (The Soul of Man)

Whittling Away (The Soul of Man)

 

choppin' at the

whole of man,

 

makin' him stronger

is the mighty plan...

 

given he's willin'

to go toward brightenin'

 

therefore growin' upright

and more enlightened

 

3-4-09

Reviews

[Susan]

WOW ! a powerful poem and well said...

[Michael X]

I cant help but laugh, and find this insightfully humorous, sage comedy, to be enlightened in good spirits,
the meaning pulls to such effect, loved this poem. great job

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Ah, and if we had the skill of the Greeks, we might teach him to stand on his own two feet. lol great poem.