We Don't All Fall Down

We Don't All Fall Down

 

feel the hammer

taking its mighty fall,

 

it tries so hard

at crushing us

 

one and all...

 

shall we go

without a fight

 

or instead improve

this (our) plight?

 

2-28-09

Reviews

[Fabian G. Franklin]

I like this one, reminds me of some of Robert Burn's gaelic poetry with the short choppy verse..I could here a Scot reading this...cool.