The Killing Kind

The Killing Kind

 

do all

earths' beast,

 

come equipped

with souls,

 

and is their

value set high...

 

because we seem

to not think it,

 

by the methods

in which we kill

 

11-2-08

 

Reviews

[Emily Rose]

A good sentiment, and painfully true. I have a few quick punctuation suggestions though: "earths'" should be "earth's" because you're talking about one earth and not multiple earths. I'm also assuming that you mean "beasts" instead of "beast," so you should probably make "beast" plural. Also, you overuse your commas. The only one that fits is the one after "souls," but all the others are unnecessary. It's a good poem, though, despite my nitpicking. Good job.