Wreaking Havoc (Lava Burns)

Wreaking Havoc (Lava Burns)

 

down deep

within the guts,

 

bubbles, yesterdays

many troubles,

 

as they rage

causing much damage...

 

and wreaking havoc,

all upon this fearful system,

 

now, the belly burns with lava,

and the heart just melts away;

 

no escape, from bitter love

 

10-10-08

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

Love, sweet, bitter gets in the gut and burns, after the sweetness I suppose.

Nice James.

[Shelly Wiseberg]

Liked the descriptive words you used in this poem,burning lava continues to flow taking everything in sight with anger and bitterness living on with nio escape from bitter love. Very true words sad to say,Shelly