She Longs For Herself (Aching Goodbyes)

She Longs For Herself (Aching Goodbyes)

 

leaning in

for a kiss,

 

she'd whisper

her goodnights

 

and those

aching good-byes...

 

because soon

she's leaving

 

and no-one

is the wiser,

 

until breakfast

is unmade,

 

and the

note read

 

9-30-08

Reviews

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

Wow! Very nicely done, I'm speachless, it speaks so loud quietly. Excellent.

[Laura E. Aranda]

F A V O R I T E
To my library this piece does go! Excellent work! I am astonished! Cheers,lea

[Emily B]

this is powerful stuff. . . I haven't been by to visit your words lately. My apologies for the lapse.