Brave, Through and Through

I'm so proud to have written this piece, and also, that it's going to be included in an upcoming novel.

Brave, Through And Through

 

well out

into battle

 

they go,

 

a man

and his

 

best friend,

 

just ducking

and dodging...

 

fighting the

good fight,

 

and hoping

to see

 

tomorrows' light,

 

and now

praying mightily

 

to again

 

be with

loving  family,

 

but never

forgetting

 

their duty

 

9-20-08

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Angel Baby]

:) very nice, enjoyed very much...Thanks! P.W.

[RachelleB]

A simple, well worded and movingtribute to our soldiers in the military...I like the sparseness of your words...less is always more!!

[Sarah B.]

it gives a feeling of fighting for what you believe in, you can't go wrong there...when something more important is calling you. i'm not an advocate of war, i think a lot of people enlist and wish they hadn't, but i don't put anyone down for doing it.

[Angelic Darkness]

This is so true to many love ones around the world.
Very touching.
I don't believe I've ever reviewed anything of yours, so
I thought I would see what type of writer you are all about.

Keep up the good work...AD

[Frank Terino]

This is great, the words have a form that captures the meaning, to fight the good fight,
some nice analogies here captured with simplistic nature, I enjoyed reading this poem thanks.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Very nice tribute indeed James, nice to hear its being published. good write.

[Alba T.]

Fine tribute to our men/women in the military, "A MAN AND HIS BEST FRIEND" a friend that could possibly be a woman. That is the vision I got, maybe since I know of one woman who has had to leave her family to go "INTO BATTLE".
Great write James.
Alba :-)

[Sean M. Addams]

very deep piece and liked it way it flowed together.... imagery was pretty good too !!!! nice job on this one...

[Rc R. Vagilidad]

its like the drum beat of hans zimmer's musical score, love the action in this..

and the light of tomorrow will be their guide for duty, family, and being just brave....

hope i can read your novel soon! (^^,)

[justjenn_2u]

Never forgetting their duty, admirable words. I love how you show how strong our men are for this country. A very well written tribute!!!!!

Way to go, as usual!