Forgetting Yesterday

Forgetting Yesterday

 

the bones

will twist,

 

and flesh

shall cry,

 

but, as we

leave these

 

earth shells...

 

what now

waits beyond,

 

smells like

better soil,

 

and, soon we'll

forget yesterday

 

9-8-08

Reviews

[justjenn_2u]

Funny how we will see so much mass destruction but we will forging forward to speechless beauty.

This piece starts and ends with such description that I can almost envision the pain and what lies after it.

Nice write, my friend!

[Mysty Rayn]

what now

waits beyond,



smells like

better soil,
I love how you worded this. Perfect. So often we wish to forget yesterday. You put this a way I couldn't imagine anyone putting better. Great write.