Lovers Under Cover

Written for the "Please Explain 4" contest.

Lovers Under Cover

 

come on, girl,

 

let's run off tonight,

under the cover of stars

and only the moon's sight

 

we'll get all our gear, and then

together we'll surely disappear

 

afar, but still safe, and making our own way

 

7-6-08

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[A.M.P.]

I like this poem. =) I like how you get the sense that no matter where they are going, they will be happy. Good job =D

[Clarisse Nanoit]

Cute as a can be. :) Everyone's had this longing. Let's just GET AWAY! :P Very cute, and I'm glad you entered the contest once more... You're making judging VERY difficult. lol.
KH

[Pj]

Aww eloping aye...so cute.
A wonderful little poem of love and commitment :D

[Beth]

Beautiful! I love how you made a complete story from a mere seven lines of text.