Drowning Always

Drowning Always

 

can't I

  sink

 

so deeply

  into

 

your warmest

  sea,

 

drowning always...

 

within sweetest

  love,

 

and divine

 ecstasies

 

6-29-08

Reviews

[Ice Queen of the Vampir..]

Mmm, this is a wonderful piece. Great job!!!

Heather

[Debra Stevens Edwards (..]

This is a good write but I didn't feel the passion in your words like I have in many of your other pieces.
Debby

[...]

I really love your style of writing poetry!
It's like, wonderful messages/imagery in eloquent, bite-sized pieces!

I'm pretty sure this one is my favorite...so far. :]

[Dani California]

Nice!

What a wonderful and creative way
to express the passions of a writer!

Outstanding my friend! :)

[darkgurl]

Wonderfully written, drowning into love, what a sweet write, like your style of writing.