Instead

Instead

 

shine through

the black,

 

awaken from

that pitch,

 

shake off

cold dreams...

 

and become

a rainbow

 

instead of

tomorrows' misery

 

6-29-08

Reviews

[Adela Muresan]

The idea is good ( to live the moment lolz ) , but you presented it as being something easy � when it's totally difficult.

A.M.

[darkgurl]

I like this alot, wish it were that easy though, shows promise and hope of a brighter tomorrow, very well said in just a few words.