Hungry and Willing (Wild World)

Hungry and Willing (Wild World)

 

there is

no need

 

to suffer,

all by

 

our very

own hands...

 

because this

wild world

 

is perfectly

hungry, and willing

 

6-17-08

 

 

Reviews

[Ari]

This really catches the reader's attention and doesn't let it go. My only suggestion would be a period at the end, as this seems almost unbearably unfinished to me. Unless, of course, you meant it to be that way.

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

So true, but why o we keep hurting ourselves anyway. Nice work here.

[Norma J. Jessee]

This is soooooooooo true. Our world is in a horrible mess.
Keep up the great work James.