Back to the Beginning

Back to the Beginning

 

watch the

faces change,

 

all behind

the melting candle...

 

see the

world unravel

 

upon mans'

hateful spindle,

 

taking all

and leaving none,

 

when will

time eat itself...

 

so we might go

back to the beginning

 

6-17-08

Reviews

[Carole]

A unique poem, James. I love this part:

see the

world unravel

upon mans'

hateful spindle,

Wouldn't it be cool if we could just hit "rewind?" I enjoyed this, James! If only....

[Brianna Brie]

see the
world unravel
upon mans'
hateful spindle,

I like this one. "Time eat itself" We have no choice but to be ushered along while time unravels.