Wild Dreams

Wild Dreams

 

spinning madly,

 

and chasing

wild dreams,

 

down rabbit

holes...

 

we're so

lucky,

 

iffen we

never lose

 

our very

souls

 

6-3-08

Reviews

[Shelly Wiseberg]

chasing dreams down rabbit holes, great words,You can say alot in a little poem!Shelly

[Pall and Mall]

this speaks so profoundly on the deep fear that many of us encounter in our everyday lives. i've never found a poem that expresses these emotions and experiences with the volatility of the human spirit in such a moving and tremble-inducing way. a brilliant piece of master poetry!

[Pj]

Great write...it's like a mini journey...from point A to point B- really excellent
I also hope that no one loses their souls whilst chasing dreams- what a cost for an advancement

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Indeed we'd be so luck. Well said, my friend, and with so few words.