Feast of Warmth

Written for the "Please Explain! 4" contest.

 

 

 

 

 

Feast of Warmth

 

bathing in the sunshine, and

feasting on its rays, she just knew

 

that someday, life would

surely come, brightly underway...

 

5-29-08

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Ice Queen of the Vampir..]

Wow, this is a wonderful poem. So much said in so few words. I love it, awesome write!!!

Heather

[Clarisse Nanoit]

Great. I love it!! I think you were writing for picture one, but it's not certain. I think, in the description that I would disqualify any pieces with no picture or clarification... Just fix it (if possible) and let me know when you do. I love what you did with the [assumed] picture. Even though it's not exactly an original thought for the picture, the exact words you used were touching.
KH

[Clint Hale]

Simple yet moving. I always enjoy reading short pieces that speak volumes.

Great work!

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You've said a lot more than just writing about someone on a normal day spent lazing in the sun and in such clever brevity. Thank you for sharing.

[Kara Emily Krantz]

aw that is so sweet. it gives me such a happy, hopeful feeling. :)

i love it's simplicity. and the sunshine of it :)