Love's Promise

Written for the "Please Explain! 3" contest.

Love's Promise

 

holding on

so tightly,

 

they'd promise

their love...

 

as the

sun witnessed

 

5-20-08

Reviews

[Carole]

This sounds like wedding vows to me, James. Sweet! Beautiful. Brings back memories of my son's wedding! :-)

[Pj]

This makes the heart explode with sunshine lol...no other way to explain the feeling it gives me.

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An ever reborn witness to Love. a wonderful write with minimal words yet huge expression. Thank you for sharing.

[Valentine]

Short and sweet..The sun witnessed and so did the SON..that is what makes love so wonderful..God bless..Valentine

[Clarisse Nanoit]

OMG. The last two lines were fantastical. Where do come up with these little things? I love it. Love what you did with the picture. Thanks for entering this into the contest!
KH