Surviving Hell
A Poem by
James K. Blaylock
Surviving Hell
give me
faith enough,
to survive
such hells
5-18-08
© 2008 James K. Blaylock
Reviews
That was really too short and too quick to read, but somehow, it sure does make some senses...
So, It's still good tho...
Posted 16 Years Ago
very nice.... you are really good and short to the point poems..
Posted 16 Years Ago
very nice.... you are really good and short to the point poems..
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Um yes please, I'll have a side order of happyness with that and can I upsize my portion of good fortune. I think I've been dining all wrong of late.
Kind of nice your work is. Short and sharp and to the point, I might keep reading a bit longer here.
Posted 16 Years Ago
Um yes please, I'll have a side order of happyness with that and can I upsize my portion of good fortune. I think I've been dining all wrong of late.
Kind of nice your work is. Short and sharp and to the point, I might keep reading a bit longer here.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Wonderful...except you've used two different versions of survive...giving you one word too many. BUT AGAIN THIS IS SUBLIME! You have such a gift for packing such a powerful punch in so little words.
Posted 16 Years Ago
Wonderful...except you've used two different versions of survive...giving you one word too many. BUT AGAIN THIS IS SUBLIME! You have such a gift for packing such a powerful punch in so little words.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on May 18, 2008
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James K. Blaylock Tyler, TX
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Hi, I'm James K. Blaylock and I'm a poet/writer. I'm 39, and I live in Texas. I was born and raised here. I have been writing now for 13 years and I've been blessed to be published a number of times. ..
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