Lightning-bolt

Lightning-bolt

A Poem by James K. Blaylock

 Lightning-bolt

 

seeing you

like that,

 

was such

 

a lightning

 -bolt

 

5-18-08

 

 

 

 

© 2008 James K. Blaylock


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Haha, I dont know if you meant it the way I read it... But to me it reads run away very very fast.
but of course it could simply be a light bulb moment.. but I like the run off fast take, its more comical to my visual, and I need to giggle at present. =)

These little ditties are kind of catchy, a nice niche you have going here I think.



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Haha, I dont know if you meant it the way I read it... But to me it reads run away very very fast.
but of course it could simply be a light bulb moment.. but I like the run off fast take, its more comical to my visual, and I need to giggle at present. =)

These little ditties are kind of catchy, a nice niche you have going here I think.



Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LOVED THIS TOO, but it has too many words for the contest...HOWEVER, THE IMAGERY HERE IN SUCH A SUCCINCT WAY IS PERFECT!

Posted 16 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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James K. Blaylock
James K. Blaylock

Tyler, TX



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Hi, I'm James K. Blaylock and I'm a poet/writer. I'm 39, and I live in Texas. I was born and raised here. I have been writing now for 13 years and I've been blessed to be published a number of times. .. more..

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