She Saw Tomorrow...

A Poem by James K. Blaylock

Written for the "Safety in Numbers" contest.

she saw

tomorrow...

and it

shone,

heavenly

5-18-08

© 2008 James K. Blaylock

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Touché Armada

Great power pack, I'm not one to make corrections as a rule, but its not quite right to me... Please dont kick me, but

she saw

tomorrow...

and it

shown (?) (it doesnt quite work the grammer is a little off.. you could use showed, or even shone or perhaps played or well there are a few options, for the rest it's quite nice.)

heavenly
(even) =)

Posted 16 Years Ago

2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

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Touché Armada

Edit: or it could be changed to it's and that would fix it as well =)

Posted 16 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Touché Armada

Posted 16 Years Ago

2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

SM Davis

PERFECT! And you got that I only wanted seven words...I didn't ask for seven words total. Loved this!! Ethereal, and no further explanation is needed. I'm awed!

Posted 16 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on May 18, 2008
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James K. Blaylock

Tyler, TX

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Hi, I'm James K. Blaylock and I'm a poet/writer. I'm 39, and I live in Texas. I was born and raised here. I have been writing now for 13 years and I've been blessed to be published a number of times. .. more..