No Time, No Time!

No Time, No Time!

A Poem by James K. Blaylock

No Time, No Time!

 

while the hands

never stop moving,

 

we slowly all

find ourselves,

 

just wasting

on away...

 

5-17-08

© 2008 James K. Blaylock


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a great observation on the relentlessness of time... time takes so long, waits for no one and will chew you up and spit you out... I took all of that from this piece... good job!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I would drop the "on" and make it "wasting away".
Yeah-from the time you are born, you begin to die-ever hear that? or "Time waits for no one"...

I look in the mirror and know THAT'S true.

Posted 16 Years Ago
ahhh this was sad :-(

Posted 16 Years Ago

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James K. Blaylock
James K. Blaylock

Tyler, TX



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Hi, I'm James K. Blaylock and I'm a poet/writer. I'm 39, and I live in Texas. I was born and raised here. I have been writing now for 13 years and I've been blessed to be published a number of times. .. more..

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