Mourning Coffee

Mourning Coffee

 

sipping this

mourning coffee,

 

and trying hard,

to come to grips...

 

with all the murder, you'd

forgetfully commit, whilst

 

out at night

blind-fool-driving

 

5-10-08

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Mary Quast]

I love the play on words! Way cool!

[Prose-full]

love the twist...
nice style..

[Eunice Crankyponts]

I like the play on words - mourning in the morning with your cup of coffee....drunken driving and the selfishness of it. Great poem!

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Mourning coffee, that is simply an ingenious twist, liked that play on the words, keep it up.

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

Sounds like a drunk driver killed someone to me. Well that's what I read out of this. Good job .Thank you for sharing. debileah

[vanishing]

sipping this
mourning coffee,

first time i've seen
grieving represented in such a way
Thats creative.. to ponder the death
of someone close due to another's
greedful mistake.. like drunk driving
I'm sure this writing will hit home
with many.