Forever Night

Forever Night

A Poem by James K. Blaylock

Forever Night

 

with the saddest sensations

weighing heavily upon them,

 

they knew, the news, might

only bring more stinging tears...

 

and still their son lay listless,

within an unawakinging night

 

5-10-08

© 2008 James K. Blaylock


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gave me goosebumps.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

james-this writing speaks in many
directions and leaves the reader
pondering the heartfelt meaning
more news-more tears-
sounds like the son has passed away
skillfully rendered

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The last line was perfect for the vivid sadness of the poem. A so true statement yet with a profound, not turning back emotion. Great write.


Brette

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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 Added on May 11, 2008

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James K. Blaylock
James K. Blaylock

Tyler, TX



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Hi, I'm James K. Blaylock and I'm a poet/writer. I'm 39, and I live in Texas. I was born and raised here. I have been writing now for 13 years and I've been blessed to be published a number of times. .. more..

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