Longing for Winter's Kiss

Longing for Winter's Kiss

 

bring down

 

those soft

white flakes,

 

atop my

icy head

 

and chilled

shoulders...

 

for it

truly is

 

the winter

 -time;

 

and I

long

 

to taste

the snow

 

11-19-07

Reviews

[vanishing]

your vision comes to life james
makes the reader feel like a kid again
this is one of my favorites from you
Magical.. Skillfully Nice Work.

those soft

white flakes,

atop my

icy head

and chilled

shoulders...

[Travis Lawrence]

Again, great contrast in such a short space. Your theme is winter, cold and depressing, but you "long to taste the snow", a hopeful finish. Enjoyed it very much.

-Travis