Picnicking

Picnicking

 

sitting out amongs

all the sweet smells,

 

and enjoying the company

of a gorgeous other... whilst

 

eating our summer meals,

together upon this blanket

 

5-8-08

 

Reviews

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

Guess you got that spring feeling going on. As usal your words are expertly executed creating a visual effect. It's pouring down raining, but I saw the sun in your poem.

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Succinct and quite delightfully sweet. What a wonderful day you have described. Thank you.
Light,
Siddartha

[Norma J. Jessee]

Another great memory. I haven't had a picnic like that in some time. I think if this coming Sunday is a nice day, we'll gather the family and go to the park and enjoy a great pic-nic with all the works including those annoying little ants.

Great job, James

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

Short and sweet, thoughts drift to a lovely spring day, good write. Thank you for sharing. Debileah