Minutes In Between

Minutes In Between

 

if the hour

is at hand,

 

then, what are

the minutes in between...

 

footnotes

 

5-5-08

Reviews

[Gary H]

I love poems about time. They are always so fascinating as thats the one most successful invention us humans have ever created. Those little hands moving round, er, well, the big hand and the little hands moving round rule our world. I think thats what your poem conveys to me. Also we now fade into insignificance against our invention.

Nice thoughts.

[neanie]

footnotes.......pleasant thought and a significant piece to me.

[vanishing]

James- and what are the minutes between footnotes
The hour at hand

Expressed as cleverly original
in concept
why hasn't anyone thought of such
a term to light-this poem is
exactly the answer
they are moments
drawn to ponder.
This is representative of poetry.

[Norma J. Jessee]

Excellent!!!!!!!!!!

I love this, James.

Something to think about.