Circle of Life

Written for the "Copy my new style..."Soulful End Rhyme" contest.

Circle of Life

 

seeing the signs           Looking

tasting the time,         Wanting

forever is chasing        Following

never slowing...          Marking

welcoming horizons    Glorifying

freeing feelings,         Weeping

and making dreams     Hoping

casting all schemers    Banishing

fixing a homestead     Planting

and growing up          Raising

becoming fruitful       Birthing

new life beautiful...   Glowing

then aging wisely       Smiling

and going heavenly    Ascending

 

5-2-08

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

    

 

 

   

 

Reviews

[None]

I am very gleeful ! I have never used that word since third grade but your poem is so lovely! I really like the story being told and your fitting descriptions as well. I love reading this over and over. Awesome poem. Good luck in the contest and thank you so very much for entering the "Soulful End Rhyme" contest. You have got a distinctive style to your writing!

[vanishing]

Wow
this must have been a blast to write
as it was to read!
nice job
worked its way full circle
spot on descriptions
From looking to ascention