Another Shot

Another Shot

take another
shot

and maybe
tomorrow,

it won't
be the
awakening

of the
damned...

next to
big ugly

7-28-07

Reviews

[Michael X]

lol, thats crafty, another shot and what happenes when one drinks too much, sometimes the regrets
can be more than the heart can handle, this is a great analogy, to wake up next to someone who would
otherwise have never been considered only because of the wise choice, shootimng one too many,
there is a humorous aspect to this, like a telling of worst romatic experiences, a lesson to be heard, the
straight-line form justifies the intent wording, intent on speaking to the reader's consious, i think
many people can relate, surely, myself included, purely poetic in design, thanks for sharing, excellent.

[.]

Left me thinking .. Funny piece
Nice job!

[closed account]

haha!! I like this!!!!! it is very simular to mine...:-)

[vanishing]

The dreaded wake in the morning!
And thats what shots will do to a person
lol-clever and classic
A true Poet's poet
makes the reader think!
thanks.