Lone Star State of Mind

Written for the "Lone Star" contest. Wish me luck!

Lone Star State of Mind

 

after been

born here,

 

you'd think

it safe

 

to assume,

 

I know

most anything

 

about this

great state;

 

but truly

Texas

 

is like

any other

 

sublime place,

 

holding much

glowing beauty

 

upon her

sunny face...

 

4-22-08

Reviews

[Michael X]

texas and the sun go hand and hand, you have the correct in its full truth, and captures the
Texas famous blue sky in your words, when envisioning such, a beautiful state, delighted,
tributing thought to her glory, i can definitely appreciate the sentiment, having lived
here for some time myself, you've captured the southern vibe with its colorful passion,
and its charming ways, how just the air alone seems to have its own western feeling, excellent, inspired.

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This was a delightful little adventure in Texas conveyed with short sweet words.

[Kris Tate]

I really like this, the simplicity of it shows all Texas is...more than one can encompass. Great write