Lake of Fire

Lake of Fire

 

wipe away

that shame,

 

and kiss

freedom bye...

 

cause tomorrow

is forever

 

within this

lake of fire

 

4-5-08

Reviews

[Michael X]

magnificent, now this writing pulls the reader into the concept, your words
your vision comes to life here james, its revelational and speaks eternity, indeed,
to burn in the lake of ones own sins against humanity, himself and others, becuase
of misdeeds indeed, what goes around comes around also, this writing draws
the heart to ponder choices, a great appreciative fact, keep up the great work

[vanishing]

Riveting
and makes much sense in light
of the context
I'll agree with my previous review
A warning of future
sensed in the present
excellent

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This is good. I like this style of poetry. It gets right to the point and has a lot of meaning. Great writing!