Touching Teeth

Touching Teeth

 

awakening within

this dark,

 

and feeling

longingly

 

with numb

finger-tips...

 

I'd touch

whatever hides,

 

even if

it bites

 

and rips

 

4-5-08

 

 

Reviews

[Michael X]

thats classic, touching teath, expressed with certain voice one can feel the subtle agony in your
words, the entire writing flows soft like misty darkening creeeping into the soul,
the way you expressed in essence keep the reader on the edge of their seat, touching teath,
like touching the beast who hides in the shadows, brilliantly devised james, the wording
brings the character to life, ripping, tearing, thats passionate, thanks for sharing

[Shelly Wiseberg]

I like the words you used, and they say alot, Shelly