Fruitful

Fruitful

 

dancing on the vine,

 

and rejoicing herein

beaming summer rays...

 

surely this be, but one,

 

of the coming down

shinning glory days

 

3-13-08

 

 

 

Reviews

[Michael X]

i splendid vision of renewel, to feel invigerated by the, i feel a claasic ambiemnce flow through your words
"glory days" the best times of life and how one is reminded by the sunrise and sunsets, the making of days, your words hold the quality showing what makes memories special, as well as present a refreshing outlook that carries with it a sense of endearment, "fruitful" metaphorically leaves the reader inspired.

[Norma J. Jessee]

For some reason as I read this I kept thinking of tomato's ripening on the vine. Beautiful red tomato's hanging there in the sunshine just waiting for me to come along with a salt shaker and a piece of corn bread, and pluck it right off the vine and enjoy right there in the garden. I sooooo remember doing just this when I was a youngster.

Beautifully written.

[THE BLACK SEAL]

beautiful

[mick weller]

This means a lot to me as I make my own cider (hard cider in the States?) - from apples ripened during the summer sunshine as is the grape you so neatly describe!
though I'm not familiar with:

of the coming down

shinning glory days

the word shinning - is this a careless shining, or am I missing something?
cheers

I'm tempted to request an apple version to link to from my cider making blog!

[Mike L. Smyth]

I love this one! so simple, eyet it says so much! well done...i understand