Sad Love Affair

Sad Love Affair

 

I listen

so intently,

 

for some

 whisper,

 

to come

here sweetly...

 

but often

I stand,

 

and tire

into dismay

 

3-13-08

Reviews

[Michael X]

lol, oh you got me on this poem, for this depicts the tragedy of a sad love affair, and how sad that would be to be a cheating heart, torn by the act of not being able to fulfill such lustful intentions,
its heartbreaking for all the wrong reasons, and thats what makes this poem brilliantly devises, shows the reader the oppisite side of the square, only revealed by those with developed pattern.

[J. James Reider]

short and sweet... you managed to say in 19 words what I have had trouble saying in 39 lines... lol... "but often I stand, and tire into dismay" pretty much sums up the way I end up when waiting on things... great work!

[Norma J. Jessee]

This is so sad and lonely sounding. I can just see the person standing their starring off into the distance with a sad and lonely look on their face.

Very good write.

[THE BLACK SEAL]

very nice

[mick weller]

Wow - yet again your stuff is blowing me away!
I'm so moved by this piece...
...but trying to stay objective... I think the title is a bit too 'in your face'?
aren't we just looking for a sign? ...just some simple message of hope?
and then how we cling to that...
- there is no Love Affair - just hope for another sign? A gesture of hope?
this had so much touched a nerve that I've just bookmarked this very page,
cheers mate