The Mounting Mess

The Mounting Mess

 

not really

ready, or

 

so very

willing, either...

 

to just

stop dead,

 

within these

tired tracks;

 

for I'm

still trying,

 

my hardest

to overcome;

 

and rise

above this

 

mounting mess

 

2-26-08

 

Reviews

[Kara Emily Krantz]

i really liked this. i related to it, felt it strongly right now. it's like... i want to stop, i'm overwhelmed, but i don't... because i'm trudging uphill on this mess, and i want to overcome it.

i liked the format of it very much. it read very smoothly, and was the perfect length.

great job :)

[Michael X]

Really excellent read here james, i really enjoyed the flow in this
sculpted work of thought, also has an uplifting messege of overcoming,
which inspires the readers heart to succeed in adversity,
the mounting mess, like a mountain of circumstances, visiual metaphoric
descriptiveness, i agree, very smooth, masterfully crafted, mike

[Fabian G. Franklin]

I usually get a shovel to get rid of the mounting mess, it works good for horses. lol