Soaring Pains

A Poem by James K. Blaylock

Soaring Pains

weak and wasting,

this life is merely taking

everything away everyday...

and we go down in flames,

with nothing more than soaring pains

2-21-08

© 2008 James K. Blaylock

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Norma J. Jessee

Yes, from the day of birth we start our process of dying, and everyday life just takes us one step closer to death.

Profound and thought provoking

Posted 16 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

THE BLACK SEAL

very deep

Posted 16 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

An Ordinary Woman

I agree with Bubo, this is powerful and I can relate to it because I live and I learn and such is life it seems.

I've missed your writing, James. It is good to be here again. :+)

Posted 16 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bubo

What great imagary in a short piece, that life can be a soaring pain, taking from us all
weak and wasting.........very powerful words......and one I feel is very true.

Posted 16 Years Ago

2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

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Added on February 21, 2008

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James K. Blaylock

Tyler, TX

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Hi, I'm James K. Blaylock and I'm a poet/writer. I'm 39, and I live in Texas. I was born and raised here. I have been writing now for 13 years and I've been blessed to be published a number of times. .. more..